A geek is in search of the mysterious girl that kissed him on Halloween, but his only clues are her blonde hair...and her pink Converse shoes.
the girl in the converse shoes
I enjoyed the concept. I wish that the author would have made the book longer and more detailed.
A cute short story but nothing more. Needs to be longer and more details as everyone else suggests.
Love this book so good
It needed a some more detail and it was really short. It would be great if you made a lot longer and added more detail, but it does have a great idea to it.
I respect flash fiction, so it is easy to understand why the story is so short. While it used descriptive language and it is clear the author has a lot of talent, it simply fell a little short as far as the plot line went. With flash fiction, the reader wants to leave with the same wholesome, completed feeling that any good story offers - no matter the length. It’s something that comes with practice, and with the level of talent the author has exhibited thus far, I have no doubt they will manage just fine. I look forward excitedly to any works this author may have in the future!
Good but not great.
The book was good I just wish That there was more suspense put into it like who was she? And stuff like that although it was Good it needed more detail and more of a plot to work up to I would recommend it to people who want a very short read for free but if you want something long with more suspense and more of a plot to work up to then maybe this book isn’t for you.
Not as nice as u expect
This was a nice book.. hoped that it would have some suspense, some drama, but it did not so it’s not catchy at all or I don’t love it other depends on you😉
good book. to short
It was very interesting but it was very short. I felt it could’ve been better if it was longer or he met a bunch of girls and had to figure it out, it could’ve been a LOVELY story..